Monday, January 2, 2012

A Poem - The Mishap - Do You Like?

Haha, that's great! It really is... merry! It's cheerful and nice. But I think the lines "Misshapen and sad/ It was very very bad!" should be changed. That's a kindergarten rhyme. But I really like it, and now I'll go on my way this morning feeling a lot more cheerful. Thanks!

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